User talk:Hannahshipman/sandbox

=Evaluations=

10/16/2018 Evaluation by Acrimin

 * Points: 41.5
 * Grade: 103%

Spelling/Grammar
Meets Expectations I found no spelling or grammatical errors.

Language
Meets Expectations The sentence flow is good, and I can see how your original sentences would fit in well with the rest of the article. It's formal, but not hard to read. I might change the "Since" that leads the last sentence to something else to make it sound a little more official, though, like: "As the Spillane family owned and operated the Spillane Tobacco Company, the tower was commonly referred to as the Snuff Box." But that's just personal choice, and doesn't really have any bearing on the article as a whole.

Organization
Meets Expectations Sentences are organized in a clear and concise way.

Coding
Meets Expectations Your coding is working 100% so you're all good!

Validity
Meets Expectations Your information is factual and you have all the right sources to back it up. Nicely done!

Completion
Exceeds Expectations The assignment was a paragraph worth of text and three sources. You have a paragraph worth of text, a photo, a video and seven sources.

Relevance
Meets Expectations You chose a harbor light that is an important part of Limerick's history and architecture, thus cementing its relevance and giving it a place in this article.

Spelling/Grammar
Meets Expectations Interesting and fun article. I think it would be “on” government estates rather than “in” them and I may be missing something, but I am confused as to why the first paragraph is in quotes. Maybe it’s just you organizing your work? I love the use of “then-current.”

Language
Exceeds Expectations For this type of project I feel simplicity is much more important than sophistication This article has short, concise sentences that will be easily understood by anyone who reads it—that means all age groups and people whose first language isn’t English. I really like how you have done this. There are no places of weird language use.

Organization
Meets Expectations Nothing confusing about where I am being taken through this information. It is concise, to the point, and well organized. Awesome.

Coding
Meets Expectations No discernible problems.

Validity
Exceeds Expectations I think you’ve done a great job staying within organizational perimeters. The video, the photo, and the text all complement each other in a relevant and obvious way. There is no irrelevant content here.

Completion
Meets Expectations There is a lot of room here for expansion, but then there is always space for new stuff. The thoughts you have presented, though brief, can stand on their own. I don’t feel there are significant holes in your ideas. You have met the assignment of a paragraph plus another so I feel you have exceeded what was expected of you.

Relevance
Exceeds Expectations There is no irrelevant content here that I am able to discern. The video going on about the names is kind of off topic, but visually it is excellent for showing us architecture so I think it should stay.

11/13/2018 Evaluation by Acrimin

 * Points: 45
 * Grade: 113%

Spelling/Grammar
Exceeds Expectations Well done! Everything looks great!

Language
Exceeds Expectations Again, everything is clearly written and easy to understand!

Organization
Exceeds Expectations Your reorganization did a LOT for both articles!

Coding
Exceeds Expectations Can't find a single fault in your coding!

Validity
Exceeds Expectations The information is solid and your sources are high quality!

Completion
Exceeds Expectations You add a lot of missing areas to the page which makes it feel a lot more complete as a whole! You also completed over the required two paragraphs of content, I would say.

Relevance
Exceeds Expectations Again, you chose to revise what was already there and make it better/add more sources, so I'd say your edits are very relevant!

Additional Notes
Extra I'm not sure if the assignment allows for work on two seperate pages? They're linked and more or less about the same topic, but that might be something to check with the prof to make sure it's all set before turning it in.