User talk:Hannahtaanderson/sandbox

Peer Review
The article chosen for this assignment "Athabasca Oil Sands" is an important one but because of this it makes it harder to edit it and find new information to edit. The rough draft does a good job in providing a clear picture of what needs to be changed in the article or what they plan to add. Although, more ideas could be generated to modify the article and make it even better. The draft mentions that the article could use more citations and sources for its statements but there are no citations or sources in this sandbox. Overall, the rough draft is neutral, has good structure and does have good ideas of things to add to the Athabasca oil sands article. There are also no signs of bias and the information that this draft looks to edit can be useful and relevant to the article. MHatherall (talk) 14:43, 8 March 2018 (UTC)