User talk:Hannakim2119

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Your recent work on Thulani Davis
Hi! I noticed your recent edits expanding this article. You started with little more than one sentence and a few lists, and now have produced a very good addition to Wikipedia. I've skimmed the sources you've cited. Everything seems to be in order, but I'm no expert, and am somewhat new to Wikipedia editing. The article you've produced is readable and informative now; before, it was just a placeholder.

I suggest one change you might wish to make in the lede paragraph. Consider moving the sentence about her education from the lede to the Bibliography section. Generally, the lede should be a summary; more detailed information can follow in the body. As examples, see these articles: Joyce Carol Oates, Maya Angelou (a featured article), Alice Walker, Ntozake Shange.

I removed the Unreferenced tag because I think it is no longer needed.