User talk:Hannaniakollor/sandbox

Aichakay26 (talk) 20:49, 17 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Good job on adding the specialty of cementoma.
 * I noticed on the wiki page if there was no information regarding a section, you leave asterisks, it would be a good idea to explain that there is no further research because the reader can be confused.
 * Add information on how cementoma can be prevented.
 * No mechanism section, add so there’s more emphasis on how it affects the body.

Hannaniakollor (talk) 02:57, 16 December 2020 (UTC)
 * explained sections where not enough info could be provided
 * Cementomas have no known cause/primary care to prevent them
 * Added a pathophysiology section with a few details

--Anicolaie (talk) 00:11, 14 November 2020 (UTC)Andreea Nicolaie 11/13/2020
 * I think you are headed in the right direction with this disorder, and I think you are using very concise terminology.
 * I would use links to more uncommon terminology if there is already a wiki page on it, or another source, in order to better explain some of the related words.
 * Don't forget to add footnotes and to cite any sources that you may have used.
 * In your "types" section, although it is not your main focus, I would write a few words explaining what each type is and what makes them different from eachother since your oringal topic seems very broad.
 * Since you don't have a mechanism, I would suggest looking into one of the specific types you mentioned, maybe there is something on that? Maybe something that you can use to relate to the overall idea?

Hannaniakollor (talk) 02:57, 16 December 2020 (UTC)
 * added hyperlinks to uncommon terms
 * Inserted footnotes for references
 * not sure if I will expand on types since little information could be found on 3/4 subtypes
 * mechanism is not well understood for all types, I did add more details and piece info from a case study for the mechanism.

--Sweiner02 (talk) 19:59, 23 November 2020 (UTC)
 * All sections need thorough, in-text citations.
 * Link any term that is important or uncommon to its own wikipedia article the first time it shows up.
 * Obviously, you need to fill in the empty sections.
 * Right now, this is basically a sketch. You need to do a lot of work to fill this out and make it a complete article.
 * Cause: you might be able to get a little more under some of the specific subtypes.

Hannaniakollor (talk) 02:57, 16 December 2020 (UTC)
 * citations added
 * uncommon terms linked