User talk:Hannbev/sandbox

The context of what you have so far honestly sounds great, and the source seems reliable, but I am unsure about a couple things:

For starters, where will this go on your Wikipedia page? Are you adding to a section that already exists or are you creating a new section? Further, I think it could be improved upon if you were to tie your arguments back to the central topic in a more concrete way. For example, how does having these different levels of energy commitments made by males & females lead to difference in reproductive success? Why do we have those different levels of energy commitment in the first place? I think if you add a bit more to your current draft by addressing these types of questions your addition to the wiki page on reproductive success would be great! Best of luck!

Aliciberry (talk) 04:44, 26 November 2018 (UTC)

Thank you!! — Preceding unsigned comment added by 205.175.106.85 (talk) 21:06, 28 November 2018 (UTC)