User talk:HanyTaco/sandbox

draft review
I've been looking at your draft and I have a few comments: Otherwise this is a good effort and I look forward to seeing more. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:04, 27 October 2014 (UTC)
 * If you're planning to make a new article you should take a look at creating a lede section summarizing the content of the article.
 * The Psychological Benefits section starts with "Beyond the physiological benefits...", but we've just read one paragraph and a list regarding the health dangers. I think the structure could be improved a bit, with the benefits and health risks integrated into a single section.
 * That will allow you to convert the list of common dangers into a paragraph. Since the list is so short (and it should be, as we're listing common problems) it could be turned into a paragraph with a short explanation of the prevalence and severity of each problem.