User talk:Haolivia

Nomination of A Painful Reality: Misrepresentations of Black Women in Advertisements for deletion
A discussion is taking place as to whether the article A Painful Reality: Misrepresentations of Black Women in Advertisements is suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia according to Wikipedia's policies and guidelines or whether it should be deleted.

The article will be discussed at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/A Painful Reality: Misrepresentations of Black Women in Advertisements until a consensus is reached, and anyone is welcome to contribute to the discussion. The nomination will explain the policies and guidelines which are of concern. The discussion focuses on high-quality evidence and our policies and guidelines.

Users may edit the article during the discussion, including to improve the article to address concerns raised in the discussion. However, do not remove the article-for-deletion notice from the top of the article. 123chess456 (talk) 18:31, 18 April 2014 (UTC)

Hey
What you submitted - it's a very good essay. But it's a lousy encyclopedia article. I'm very sorry; the entire flavor of the text is wrong. It's not going to survive the deletion debate unless you rewrite it completely. DS (talk) 00:17, 19 April 2014 (UTC)