User talk:Haolongzzz/Colin Huang

Preliminary Review from Kaylea
Hi, I'm starting to walk through articles and give everyone informal early feedback on how they're doing. You'll notice this is a little bit form-letter-ish but I hope it is still helpful!

My general take right now is that you're making good progress on this article, so please keep working. Be sure to incorporate feedback from the peer review. You might find it helpful to apply the peer review guide to your own article as you think about where to go next.

One area of improvement for this article will be to shift towards a more encyclopedic tone.

I know we talked about this, but just to reiterate -- to help you stay on track, you should look at an existing article on a similar topic to see what sections are included and how each topic is handled.

In terms of sources, Forbes is a good source, but perhaps you can find a few others, such as business-oriented newspapers (Financial Times? Wall Street Journal?).

Kaylea Champion (talk) 07:18, 27 January 2022 (UTC)

feedback on progress
Hi

Thanks for stopping by my office today -- you have made a lot of progress on the encylopedic tone and this article looks very good. I think the last remaining work is to add references to the section about personal views. It seems like there are a lot of references added, but only a little bit of information for each one. As you do your final review before go-live, you might be able to dig a few more key details out about Huang and his life. When you're ready, the article looks ready. Good luck!

As a reminder, here are our go-live steps:


 * 1) Final read-through draft.
 * 2) Check live article for changes. [History Tab]
 * 3) Two browsers side by side, if you can. Code mode, not visual editor.
 * 4) Paragraph by paragraph copy, leaving behind an explanatory edit summary after each chunk of changes.
 * 5) Note on article talk page.
 * 6) Note at the top of your sandbox version.
 * 7) Celebrate!