User talk:Happy-melon/Wikipedia:Protection policy (draft rewrite 2008)

I have been working on a rewrite of this policy, which I would appreciate comments on. It is not the intention to actually change any of the spirit, only the manner in which it was laid out. I hope it is more consistent and easier to read, and also easier to link to specific sections. Comments and criticisms welcome on the talk page. Happy‑melon 19:51, 6 March 2008 (UTC)
 * If anyone wants to see a diff of this you can see it here. -Royalguard11 (T·R!) 20:10, 6 March 2008 (UTC)
 * I've looked over the difference between the pages, and it does look better actually. I think separating "software protection" from admin protection abilities is a good idea. Anybody else? -Royalguard11 (T·R!) 20:19, 6 March 2008 (UTC)
 * Much more clear, and uses terminology of WP:User access levels. --209.244.43.122 (talk) 02:57, 11 March 2008 (UTC)


 * Good work. I think your version is clearer. - Neparis (talk) 03:27, 14 March 2008 (UTC)