User talk:HappyLittleCloud/sandbox

Ottoman background

 * The first sentence is a little confusing, since it is under the Ottoman heading you might want to specify that it's about Portugal.
 * It feels like the majority of the paragraph is a quote. Maybe paraphrase one or two of the quotes to make it feel less like that?

Mir Ali Beg

 * Maybe give a brief background on who Hasan Pasha is/why he lied. I did briefly mention it in the intro of my edit though so you might not need to if we combine ours.
 * Capitalize "However" at the end of first paragraph.
 * I have an intro paragraph written for him, so you probably won't need one.
 * I noticed a lot of different sources use different years for his raids, usually off by one year. So if we both mention the same event we should just make sure we're using the same year.