User talk:Happyhelper775/Comprehensive sex education

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Hey Madison I liked your information on comprehensive sex education. The only comment I may add is to see if you can remove the words like "we" to try and make it as neutral as possible to align with wiki guidelines. Other wise great job! Carlmo1357 (talk) 19:50, 9 April 2023 (UTC)

Hi! I think your article is super interesting and contains a lot of relevant historical information. My only suggestions for improvement are some minor fixes to spelling and grammar. In the first sentence, "form" should be spelled "from." "There were backlash" should be changed to "there was backlash," and "planned parenthoods" should be capitalized and include an apostrophe. Overall this article is great, just check it over carefully for grammar, spelling, punctuation, etc. Viviangaskin (talk) 16:22, 9 April 2023 (UTC)

Hi Madison! I thought your article was very good. It seemed like you went into great depth with supporting evidence, while also remaining objective. It seems like you covered a pretty extensive history of sex education, which was really helpful and informative to read. I would agree with Molly about using "we." I think that generally, these entries try to keep pronouns out of them when referring to a reader, author, or audience. Very nice job! Prangerm (talk) 21:47, 9 April 2023 (UTC)