User talk:HareJ10

Re: Group 1 wiki
Good start, do expand it on the talk page. Two comments I have so far is: 1) section titles seem to long an unencyclopedic (see HEADING (how to name an article - advice also applies to how to name a section) and 2) you should do bottomposting, not topposting. Otherwise, good job starting early - keep it up! --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus 16:46, 25 May 2010 (UTC)

Per request by Piotrus
"Beta keys can also now be obtained by simply pre-ordering the game from GameStop." I removed it because there is alot (Amazon, Gamestop, etc.) of websites that is offering beta keys just by pre-ordering SCII. See WP:Advertising Stormedelf (talk) 05:16, 26 May 2010 (UTC)

Empty sections
Just so you know - empty sections like those are likely to be removed from articles per Manual of Style. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus 19:20, 26 May 2010 (UTC)

Periphery countries
I've closed Talk:Periphery countries/GA1 as not passed at this stage. As per my comments on the review page, don't take not being a "good article" as meaning "bad article"—it means that it doesn't comply sufficiently with Wikipedia's policies and protocols, not that it has insurmountable problems. If at any time you think it's ready, do feel free to go to WP:GAN and renominate it. – iride  scent  15:13, 24 June 2010 (UTC)