User talk:Harkey Lodger/Archives/2011/September

The Signpost: 05 September 2011
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WikiProject Yorkshire Newsletter - September 2011
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The Signpost: 12 September 2011
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The Signpost: 19 September 2011
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James Cook
For the time being, I recommend withdrawing this ACR. The article needs some work, particularly in consolidating the references. What this means in practice is removing the apparent scatter attack on websites, using full biographies instead. Page numbers need to be added to some harvnb references, as well. I think the article can get there, just not yet. I'm happy to lend a hand, but I don't have the capacity (nor the resources) to bear a larger burden. The media usage needs reviewing, both choice and placement (more words always helps balance things out). I think more detail is also needed in several sections if I were to be happy with it if it were my area of expertise. Grandiose (me, talk, contribs) 20:26, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

The Signpost: 26 September 2011
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Whitby
I hadn't realised you'd nominated this for GA. I'll hopefully help if there's anything I can do.--J3Mrs (talk) 17:42, 29 September 2011 (UTC)