User talk:Harleywisdom32/sandbox

Copyedit an Article
You really helped improve the article. Good job! Josef Horáček (talk) 18:30, 25 February 2018 (UTC)

Adding Sources
I appreciate your well-organized sandbox. Your sources look relevant to the information you hope to support. I'm not convinced, though, that an honors thesis is the best source for the second citation. See if you can find a better source. The first step should be to look at the thesis itself and find out what sources it cites for that specific excerpt. Then go to those sources. Post a revision within a week. Josef Horáček (talk) 17:05, 4 March 2018 (UTC)


 * I regret to say that the excerpt from the second source doesn't support the claim in the article. No traditional colonies aimed to develop the people. They were mostly set up to expropriate the local resources. What does it mean that the German colonies remained undeveloped? Was it that Germany didn't really import much from them?
 * It seems that you should still look for a better second source. Do it as soon as you can. Josef Horáček (talk) 18:21, 22 April 2018 (UTC)


 * I saw you added the second source, but did you add the first one? If you're able, do it in the next two days for a better grade. Josef Horáček (talk) 02:46, 1 May 2018 (UTC)

Adding a Lead to "Nautical Time"
Go ahead and add the lead to the article. Only one correction: "time-keeping" should be hyphenated. Josef Horáček (talk) 19:37, 1 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Good job. You're done with this assignment. Josef Horáček (talk) 02:48, 1 May 2018 (UTC)