User talk:Harmswhims

edits on Thomas Sowells wikipedia article
Hi Harmswhims Thanks for your recent edits on Thomas Sowells wikipedia article. I recently added a section on his views on Joe Biden. I am new to wikipedia and am trying to write as objectively and clearly as I can. This section was flagged as having tone issues. Could you help me improve my writing by letting me know what those issues were? I have since then removed a few emotive words from the section, is that an improvement? I very much dislike bias and do not want to make this article seem biased. Thanks for your input.Gd123lbp (talk) 00:36, 2 September 2020 (UTC)