User talk:Harper70

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (July 9)
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Sulfurboy (talk) 23:44, 9 July 2015 (UTC)

Paid editing disclosure
According to Paid-contribution disclosure, you must disclose your paid editing as a SAP employee. I appreciate that you have already done this. The preferred way is to add this to your User:Harper70 page:  (see: Template:Paid). It's to keep disclosures explicit, uniform, and transparent. I'd appreciate if you added this to your user page in addition to the statement you have written. Finnusertop (talk &#124; guestbook &#124; contribs) 21:24, 14 December 2015 (UTC)

SAP SE
I have not been actively seeking any feedback.— Vchimpanzee  •  talk  •  contributions  •  18:28, 10 January 2016 (UTC)
 * Any words you would have to define that sound like "marketing speak" should be removed. I don't know what "re-implementing" would be but the last sentence should be fine other than that. Just try to say everything in a neutral way.— Vchimpanzee  •  talk  •  contributions  •  17:13, 26 February 2016 (UTC)
 * Just say customers can upgrade. That's easy enough to understand.— Vchimpanzee  •  talk  •  contributions  •  17:42, 29 February 2016 (UTC)
 * I can't take down the orange banner because I'm not sure everyone would agree. But I removed some promotional content that people might object to.— Vchimpanzee  •  talk  •  contributions  •  16:58, 2 March 2016 (UTC)