User talk:HarryBaumeister12/sandbox

Instructor feedback
Your topic is fascinating, your formatting looks great--especially citations--and your review of the content is very good. We will polish up a few of those sentences on Thursday! DaneAmanda (talk) 19:58, 31 March 2015 (UTC)

You are making good progress on this article! A minor spelling error appears in the first paragraph (improved), just so you are aware. Adding an image would also be very beneficial, when you are complete. AndrewHamsha (talk) 18:23, 2 April 2015 (UTC)

Great review of your article, and outline of your page. I would add an image to add more interest and to brighten up your page. Keep it up! Cam&#38;Thar (talk) 22:07, 3 April 2015 (UTC)

Amazing work
I find your entry very compelling. Especially the comment that "Social scientists have described microaggressions as the new face of racism". It is true that microaggression is defined as an unconscious phenomenon, yet how do we know they are not aware of this form of racism. One of the hardest things about confronting someone who has been accused of microaggression is the fact that the perpetrator might not be aware that they are being offensive, but what if they actually were. That comment presents the possibility that people are hiding behind other people's ignorance and using microaggressions to continue racism, but this time avoiding the scrutiny. A very interesting and thought provoking point. This is a very well written entry that makes good use of scholarly articles, and makes a very interesting and enforced argument with no bias. Yuskhawas (talk) 01:51, 10 April 2015 (UTC)