User talk:Harsimar21

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ICCH224 Week 01
--SoonLorpai (talk) 12:11, 14 September 2019 (UTC)


 * ✅ Congratulations! This assignment is completed. --SoonLorpai (talk) 15:50, 21 September 2019 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 02
--SoonLorpai (talk) 15:50, 21 September 2019 (UTC)

Task 1

Example of an edit by Deluxecheese in the "Graduated Pipette" article: Special:Diff/725786484

Example of a warning on Deluxecheese’s talk page: Special:Diff/727851106

Task 2

Example of an addition edit made by Ananasanana in the “Pople Diagram” article: Special:Diff/686903832/prev

Example of a warning on Ananasanana's talk page: Special:Diff/686903832

Task 3

Example of warning message the student got on their talk page after uploading copyrighted media without proper permission:

Example of copyrighted media deleted: Special:Diff/686819284


 * ✅ Congratulations! This assignment is completed. --Taweetham (talk) 09:58, 29 September 2019 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 03
--Taweetham (talk) 09:58, 29 September 2019 (UTC)

1) Topic Proposal:

Existing Topic on Trapiche emerald, as the article currently seems very incomplete, lacking any if not all information on the formation, structure, geology and treatment of this raw gemstone.

2) Brief Outline of my contribution to the article:

I will add more subtopics to the article, I have currently planned four of them; Structure and Properties, Geology, Sources and Formation and Treatments. I will also add my references at the end of the article and any pictures from Wikipedia Commons if necessary.

3) Examples/Template/Related Articles:

I will use these articles as templates:

Blue Diamond

Emerald

References: 


 * 1) Le Parc, J. (2016). Emerald Report: The secrets of Trapiche Emeralds. IEEX. http://ieex.com.co/file/2016/12/IEEX-Trapiche-Emerads.pdf
 * 2) Pignatelli, I., Giuliani, G., Ohnenstetter, D., Agrosì, G., Mathieu, S., Branquet, Y., & Morlot, C. (2015). Colombian Trapiche Emeralds: Recent Advances in Understanding Their Formation. GIA: Gems and Geology, 51(3). https://www.gia.edu/gems-gemology/fall-2015-colombian-trapiche-emeralds-recent-advances-understanding-formation
 * 3) https://www.gemsociety.org/article/trapiche-emerald/ This reference is already used in the article.

— Preceding unsigned comment added by 61.90.108.37 (talk) 02:58, 30 September 2019 (UTC)


 * ✅ Congratulations! This assignment is completed. --Taweetham (talk) 08:14, 6 October 2019 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 04
--Taweetham (talk) 08:14, 6 October 2019 (UTC)


 * I have already made a draft of my proposed article in my sandbox, I have also integrated the existing article to make sure the edits and additions work well. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Harsimar21 (talk • contribs) 02:22, 8 October 2019 (UTC)

There are several issues with your draft --Taweetham (talk) 10:38, 8 October 2019 (UTC)
 * 1) There are no internal links at all.  See my recent edits in the article to see how I added internal links.
 * 2) The section heading should not be bold face.
 * 3) References are not properly formatted.  We need inline citation.  See examples of code in your template article or read WP:CITE.  Also, we want to increase the number of reliable references.  Your draft missed the old ref.

I have made serveral changes according to your comments. Please check if it is better. Thank you.

Harsimar21 (talk) 02:23, 10 October 2019 (UTC)


 * ✅ Congratulations! This assignment is completed. --Taweetham (talk) 15:11, 12 October 2019 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 05
--Taweetham (talk) 15:11, 12 October 2019 (UTC)

I have carefully moved the article from my sandbox to the real article space. Please check if everything is alright, so I can make changes accordingly. Thank you. -- Harsimar21 (talk) 03:35, 15 October 2019 (UTC)


 * I am late here. The content has been deleted.  However, the reason provided on your sandbox's history is WP:COPYVIO with this link as a source http://ieex.com.co/file/2016/12/IEEX-Trapiche-Emerads.pdf - do you wish to continue with this article or your would like to make another proposal? --Taweetham (talk) 01:12, 20 October 2019 (UTC)

I will continue with this article and make some adjustments according to the ones suggested in the edit history. Thank you. Harsimar21 (talk) 05:12, 22 October 2019 (UTC)

I have once again drafted the article on my sandbox. Please check if it is good enough, so I can transfer it to the real article space. Thank you Harsimar21 (talk) 05:33, 22 October 2019 (UTC)

Hi Harsimar21! Thank you for your effort to revise your draft. This is probably your last attempt. I have the following comments. If you believe that the above content and formatting issues can be addressed. Please carefully integrate your draft into you nominated article Trapiche emerald. --Taweetham (talk) 01:48, 24 October 2019 (UTC)
 * 1) The content looks fine at the first glance.  However,
 * 2) * (a) relying on one single reference for the whole paragraph is not sustainable. More references can be added at later stage.
 * 3) * (b) You will also need to make sure that the contents are appropriate for this article not elsewhere such as in the main article of emerald. In Wikipedia, we do not produce redundant content and rather use internal links to refer to existing materials.
 * 4) There are minor issues with WP:MOS. Elements and compound names are not capitalized unless they are at the beginning of a sentence as per Naming_conventions_(chemistry).  The capitalization of second word in the section title is probably incorrect in a similar manner.

I have already done everything as per your comments and carefully integrated it into the real article space. Could you please check it to make sure there are no mistakes. Thank you and sorry for the inconvenience. Harsimar21 (talk) 06:40, 26 October 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ Congratulations! This assignment is completed. --Taweetham (talk) 05:11, 27 October 2019 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 07
For your information, the grading is based on the criteria below: --Taweetham (talk) 05:11, 27 October 2019 (UTC)

Ajarn, if the picture that I want to use is not in the Wikipedia Commons, then what do I do?. Thank you. -- Harsimar21 (talk) 10:55, 30 October 2019 (UTC)
 * We have discussed in class that you can upload photos that you have created by yourself to Wikimedia commons. --Taweetham (talk) 07:00, 3 November 2019 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 08
Hi Harsimar21! In addition to what we have discussed in class, please see if you can format your references using cite. --Taweetham (talk) 07:00, 3 November 2019 (UTC)

Copyright violations
Harsimar21, you have removed the copyright warning I gave you. That is your right, but I am concerned that it indicates that you do not take the issue seriously. it seems you are Harsimar21's supervisor in their capacity as a student. Could you address this with Harsimar21?  Sandstein  13:52, 13 November 2019 (UTC)
 * I am sorry for this. I have talked to Harsimar21 in person a moment ago and explained the proper process to him. --Taweetham (talk) 01:46, 15 November 2019 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 09
WP:COPYVIO is a serious issue. Please address that before we move on. --Taweetham (talk) 01:55, 15 November 2019 (UTC)
 * Please see Biomarker (petroleum).

--Taweetham (talk) 04:18, 15 November 2019 (UTC)
 * 1) Nature reference can be formatted.
 * 2) See how the book is related to the content from this link.

ICCH224 Week 10
You are now assigned a mentor. --Taweetham (talk) 06:00, 16 November 2019 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 11
Your mentor will provide detailed feedback soon. I have identified two problems at this point --Taweetham (talk) 07:16, 23 November 2019 (UTC)
 * 1) Please combine the same references. For example, Environmental Forensics. 7 (2): 105–146 apprears in refs 1 and 11.  These two should only be one reference.
 * 2) Please improve the image to include "pristane & phytane" so that it is consistent with your text. (commons:File:Biomarkers_(petroleum).png and the text in the article should be updated accordingly.)

I have made the corrections as per your comments already. Thank you. Harsimar21 (talk) 02:55, 24 November 2019 (UTC) --Taweetham (talk) 06:50, 24 November 2019 (UTC)
 * 1) Please use cite, cite web, cite book, cite article properly for all references if possible.
 * 2) The structure in your picture is wrong.  If you remove the hydrogen from a bond-line structure, the bond connecting hydrogen should be removed too.  If you remove Hs, you should do that consistently to porphyrin as well.
 * Hello, I would like to add that it might be better if you split the text up into paragraphs if you start to state a new point so that it can be easier to read like move the "Geologist and Geochemist....." to new paragraph. And maybe give more detailed about the examples you mentioned since you only explained more detail about triterpanes what about the others.--Teetee taw (talk) 13:30, 24 November 2019 (UTC)

I have already changed the picture, checked if all references are written in the &lt;cite book, journal, etc.> format and split it into paragraphs. Thank you. Harsimar21 (talk) 04:28, 26 November 2019 (UTC)

Hi p teetee, I have already made the edits as per your and ajarn's comments. Is the article good to go? Thank you. Harsimar21 (talk) 08:17, 30 November 2019 (UTC)