User talk:Hartwoodtom27

Your submission at Articles for creation: Rithika Merchant (December 19)
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Oltrepier (talk) 21:10, 19 December 2023 (UTC)


 * Hi Oltrepier, thank you for your review !
 * I would like to explain that I wrote this article using only independent and published sources (all refered as such) : the whole article is actually directly "quoted" from published sources. There are more than 30 references for every sentence of the article submitted. I mean that I didn't make up any of the text, and nothing comes from my personal comment on the artist. So could you perhaps give me more details so as to how make my article more neutral ? Because I don't see how I could make it more neutral. Are 30 different sources not enough? I didn't mention any source that are in direct relation to the artist and that could look like advertisement (like : her website, the website of her galleries, etc).
 * I compared to many wikipedia articles about other artists and I referred to these when building the same kind of structure for my article, and some of these wikipedia pages that I read, contained way less sources that I have mentioned in my own article. That's why I'm not sure to understand your review ? Your accurate feedback will be appreciated on this ! Thanks a lot for your time!
 * Tom Hartwoodtom27 (talk) 16:25, 20 December 2023 (UTC)

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 22:06, 20 May 2024 (UTC)