User talk:Haveagooddavis/sandbox

New section
Testing the talk stuff! -Haveagooddavis (talk) 05:56, 22 January 2020 (UTC)
 * Cool! -Haveagooddavis (talk) 05:57, 22 January 2020 (UTC)

Your page reads very nicely and you have included several citations, but I was left wanting more detail. In between points throughout the page, I thought it would be beneficial to include more detail if it is available. For instance, are there other perspectives on his work or microcinematography at large? Did he encounter any difficulty getting the scientific community to accept the integration of film and microbiology? I am not sure if other perspectives are available, but I think your article would feel more well-rounded if they are. Sejohnson1 (talk) 17:50, 14 February 2020 (UTC)


 * I definitely understand the want for more information. There is a difficulty with this topic in that it is hard to find English language literature about Comandon. To your point about the scientific community's acceptance of his work, I could include some information about the screening of his first film and the reception to that. Haveagooddavis (talk) 18:10, 14 February 2020 (UTC)

Peer Review
General Notes: An information-dense and Wikipedia-style language contribution.

Biography: "got him in touch" can be worded differently.

Legacy: "The speeding up of naturally slow processes through time-lapse photograph" could be compressed down to "time-lapse photography" with very minor (if at all) loss of clarity. Wswendt (talk) 03:44, 16 February 2020 (UTC)