User talk:Hayashipw

October 2018
Hello, and welcome to Wikipedia. We welcome and appreciate your contributions, but it appears you have written or added to an article about yourself, at Draft:Sean Lam. Creating an autobiography is strongly discouraged – see our guideline on writing autobiographies. If you create such an article, it may be deleted. If what you have done in life is genuinely notable and can be verified according to our policy for articles about living people, someone else will probably create an article about you sooner or later (see Wikipedians with articles). If you wish to add to an existing article about yourself, please propose the changes on its talk page. Please understand that this is an encyclopedia and not a personal web space or social networking site. If your article has already been deleted, please see: Why was the page I created deleted?, and if you feel the deletion was an error, please discuss it with the deleting administrator. Thank you.  Grey joy talk 06:15, 9 October 2018 (UTC)

Citation style
Hi, welcome to wikipedia! Your newly created page is well referenced which is very good. I just like to point you to WP:REFB as your references currently are inserted before a statement. From the how-to guide, "Generally references are added directly after the information they support, at the end of the sentence and after any punctuation." as it does make sense to give some information then the reference which support it rather than the given the references and readers are not sure what is the reference is supporting until they read it and then go back to the start of the information. I have made the changes for you so you can see the flow is much better. --Xaiver0510 (talk) 09:25, 31 October 2018 (UTC)

A page you started (Sean Lam) has been reviewed!
Thanks for creating Sean Lam.

I have just reviewed the page, as a part of our page curation process.

Thanks for your new article on Sean Lam. Note that some of the footnotes are missing required fields, as can be seen by the red alerts in the list of references at the bottom of the article.

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---  DOOMSDAYER 520 (Talk&#124;Contribs) 16:03, 7 December 2018 (UTC)