User talk:Haydenmanninen/new sandbox

The current draft of the information looks pretty good, there's a fair amount of information about the chemist itself as well as the molecules the person was studying. There could be more citations within the article, but I see that there were spaces left for these citations to be filled in, and there could be more linking to pre-existing wikipedia pages throughout the drafted piece. Linking to other pages may help reduce the amount of explanation needed throughout the article for different written terms because the reader of the article could just click the link and go to a different page that's focused on that particular idea or concept. I think that there could be more information about how the scientist conducted his work, specifically the different types of tests used or how the link was established between vitamins and sterols. There's a good amount of information about what sterols and vitamin D3 are, but I think there could be a little bit more about how the scientist and his group were working with them. Some tests were mentioned by name, but a limited description was given about how these tests were performed or the results of them. I also think that adding a section about how his work has impacted the field of chemistry may be beneficial because it could show why his work received the Nobel Prize or why the research he did matters today (which leads to why there should be a wikipedia page about him). Mtang19 (talk) 03:27, 13 May 2019 (UTC)Maya Tang