User talk:Haydenmanninen/sandbox

Marissa's Peer Review
Hi guys!

---include more citations to support data if possible--especially when statistics are included
 * I recommend reading through the biography and removing extraneous words--you want it to be as easy and clear to read. For example, when stating--"He married Elizabeth Resau in 1915 and they had three children together, Gunter, Gustav, and Margarete"--you can delete the word together because it is redundant.
 * Link how sterols connect to Windaus and why they are important to be included in the Wikipedia article
 * Add a citation for the first sentence of Vitamin D2 and D3 to support the claim

"The possibility of polymerization was tested to be inaccurate through evaluating the molecular weight, and were also able to denounce certain isomerization The secondary alcohol displacing to a double bond was shown to not occur through Zerewitinoff’s method and a double bond to a steric rearrangement didn’t occur under observance of titration and catalytic hydrogenation." ---Add period between these sentences


 * I think ya'll have done a great job explaining the life of Adolf and the chemistry throughout this article. The main advice that I would recommend is including more references! :)

MShumaker (talk) 00:51, 12 May 2019 (UTC)