User talk:Hazardous Matt/Archive 3

Re
Yeah, that will work in my mind. Out of Universe needs to be linked though.-- Will C  20:30, 20 August 2008 (UTC)


 * Hey, well the ips think we're friends, then lets act like it. How are you doing? What articles are you working on?-- Will C  09:07, 27 August 2008 (UTC)


 * Interesting, I found your sandbox for NOD already, it sounds fine, from what I've read. Well, in case you were wondering, I'm working on Hard Justice (2008) in my Sandbox. Preparing No Surrender (2008). I have Lockdown (2008) and Sacrifice (2008) both under GA reviews. I'm hoping they both pass. Been working on Destination X (2008) every once in a while. Trying to find time to work on Victory Road (2008). Right now my main project is Slammiversary (2008), which I'm working on in my Sandbox.-- Will C  19:24, 27 August 2008 (UTC)


 * Yeah, another guy working on that part will help. However, just don't work on anything from 08. I plan on making all of those GAs. Bound for Glory is my project to get to FA.-- Will C  02:31, 28 August 2008 (UTC)


 * They'll both work. I would make a section at WP:PW to get more opinions though.-- Will C  02:16, 11 September 2008 (UTC)

IP
ANI may be able to help. Darrenhusted (talk) 15:55, 21 August 2008 (UTC)

Help Me
Help me... work on the "Simply Priceless" page on my sandbox —Preceding unsigned comment added by Brothers of destruction (talk • contribs) 14:40, 5 September 2008 (UTC)

Re: Hardy
Yes, but the problem is that its for a championship shot at No Mercy, which is a future event. I'd be tempted to remove it as week-by-week anyway, as that's really notable; winning the Championship at No Mercy would be notable, but how he qualified to be in the match isn't notable. See Dwayne Johnson, there's nothing really about how he qualified for a championship match, unless it was notable to something else (in the case of Johnson it was the ending of the Nation). ♥ Nici ♥ Vampire ♥ Heart ♥ 16:35, 16 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Well, I'm glad we're on the same page. ;) Sure, I'll wander over and throw in my 2 cents. ♥ Nici ♥ Vampire ♥ Heart ♥ 16:40, 16 September 2008 (UTC)

Your Nation Rewrite
Saw your request on the wikiproject talk page. Here's a list of things I came across (mostly minor)


 * Early on, the sentence of "A revised Nation of Domation was by the WWF" is missing a word; perhaps "was used" by the WWF?
 * In the second paragraph of the WWF section, "D'Lo brown" - Brown should be capitalized
 * A Cold Day in Hell - Maybe link this if there is an article?
 * Last paragraph of the WWF section: "This led to yet another revision in the Nation, as Farooq's lost was used as a catalyst for the revision and all members of the Nation, with the exception of Farooq and D'Lo Brown, were removed." I propose rewriting this sentence as: "Farooq's loss led to a another revision for the Nation; all the members, excepting Farooq and D'Lo Brown, were removed."
 * 2nd paragraph of the WWF section: Ground Zero, link this if possible? (I assume it was a PPV)
 * Badd Blood - see right above
 * At D-Generation X... - same as above
 * "Kama Mustafa, who transitioned from a quiet enforcer to a charismatic womanizer known as "the Godfather" - might want to mention the Hos, not a big deal, but could help emphasize the womanizer aspect.
 * I'll just go ahead and say now that I would link all the PPVs because I'm seeing a lot of them and I won't waste more space.
 * I would mention the members of DX when they were fueding with the Nation
 * General thought: I'd add a lot of internal links in the body of the article. There were very few.  The general wording of the article was good and it read pretty well, it would give a reader a good idea of the subject.
 * References: The current article has 29 references and your sandbox write (at the moment), has 18...while more does not necessarily mean better, it might be a good idea to check out of those references and see if they can add anything.

That's the feedback I came up with reading it. If you'd like to me to actually take a crack at editing it I'm more than happy to, or you can run with the suggestions and I'll throw out some ideas here and there. Hope my suggestions helped.  Dooms Day349  23:00, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Just a note on references, I'm fairly certain that online world of wrestling is considered a reliable source by the project. It used to be blacklisted as obsessedwithwrestling but they let in online world now.  Pww should be good as well.  I've used both of them in articles in the past.  Dooms  Day349  23:42, 18 September 2008 (UTC)

D&D articles for Wikipedia 0.7
Hi there! :)

As someone who's worked on D&D and/or RPG articles before, I'm inviting you to participate in our goal to both improve articles that have been selected to be placed in the next Wikipedia DVD release, as well as nominate more to be selected for this project. Please see the WikiProject D&D talk page for more details. :) BOZ (talk) 16:23, 24 September 2008 (UTC)

PPV
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--Brothers of destruction (talk) 19:13, 3 October 2008 (UTC) im meaning which of them do you prefer example a - Randy Orton defeated Jogn Cena (c) or -Randy Orton made Cena say I Quit after choking him with an exhaust pipe ???

Ya, I do want help with a signature —Preceding unsigned comment added by Brothers of destruction (talk • contribs) 20:55, 3 October 2008 (UTC) Can you make on saying Ministry of Darkness, in purple and black font colors no background and in small letters and up it says Deadman and in small letters and in the bottom says "Inc." —Preceding unsigned comment added by Brothers of destruction (talk • contribs) 21:58, 3 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Signatures

Re:DXCena
Woops, thanks for telling me, I misinterpreted his comment.-- S R  X  20:32, 6 October 2008 (UTC)

Title regins
Do we still acknowledge when wrestler hold their titles for One year and so on. Im just asking because that one things I know people like me like reading is how long a wrestler holds their titles Supermike] ([[User talk:Supermike|talk) —Preceding undated comment was added at 01:52, 8 October 2008 (UTC).

Zukhits
Thank you for your feedback on the page. Could you please tell me how to improve the article and resolve the problem? —Preceding unsigned comment added by JPercy (talk • contribs) 21:03, 9 October 2008 (UTC)