User talk:Hcaoduc/sandbox

Feedback on 2nd draft
Michelev (talk) 17:27, 16 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Very thorough summary.
 * Remove bold and italicized text - bolded text does not need editing.
 * Coding error in last heading.
 * Wikipedia style has all text flush left, even at beginning of paragraph. Paragraph breaks are indicated with extra line spacing.