User talk:Hcmaller

Most of the topics in the article were relevant to American football, but there were a few times where the writer talked about a project. This kind of made it feel not like an informational page.

They could have added new things such as ways in improving their concussion rates, etc.

There was not much information on their page. They did not really talk much about the sport, history, procedures.

It did not feel like there was bias. The article seemed neutral.

There were not citations

This is a C-rated article and I feel as if it were from a high schooler creating a project for their teacher just to get a good grade. There is no thought/effort put into this article. I did not learn anything from reading it.

Hcmaller (talk) 00:10, 7 September 2018 (UTC)

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Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (December 10)
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Robert McClenon (talk) 04:41, 10 December 2018 (UTC)

User:Hcmaller/sandbox


Hello, Hcmaller. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or draft page you started, User:Hcmaller/sandbox.

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it. —&thinsp;JJMC89&thinsp; (T·C) 02:17, 11 June 2019 (UTC)