User talk:Hcsamuel/sandbox

Draft Review
I think Carrie Bradshaw from Sex and the City is a great example. Overall the language seems fine. I especially like the point about the tension between living a sexually liberated life and seeking validation from men. The only suggestions I really have concern the language/tone of one word and a quick grammar fix. Saying Carrie Bradshaw is the "perfect" example might be troublesome. While she is a great example, I think the word perfect pushes it too far and makes it seem biased. The only other thing is that "endless" needs to be changed to "endlessly" in the fourth sentence. Overall, good work so far! Bmwoodwo (talk) 14:08, 1 March 2018 (UTC)