User talk:Hdesro1/sandbox

Editing Assignment
I plan on editing Kunai. I plan on editing any grammatical or diction errors I may find.
 * Approved. Josef Horáček (talk) 18:24, 7 February 2015 (UTC)

Sources Assignment
I plan on adding sources to the article on Paradise Fish.Hdesro1 (talk) 02:48, 10 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Good choice. Josef Horáček (talk) 19:25, 10 February 2015 (UTC)

Lead Assignment
The article whose lead I plan to add is Sexual dimorphism in dinosaurs.

Hdesro1 (talk) 23:49, 19 February 2015 (UTC)

Summary of article:
I feel like the article is very well balanced and in order. The sections shown are given an appropriate amount of information for their relativity of the topic; and they also are arranged in an organized, easy to read way. For example, the concept sexual dimorphism is given a nice moderately sized paragraph; however, the examples and evidence of sexual dimorphism in dinosaurs is given a much longer, more detailed section.

Hdesro1 (talk) 04:29, 23 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Good choice. Josef Horáček (talk) 19:38, 24 February 2015 (UTC)

Lead:
Sexual dimorphism in dinosaurs refers to the different physical characteristics of male and female dinosaurs of the same species. This means that the male and female dinosaurs of a species may differ in size, color, shape, or they may even look like a completely different species altogether, such as in the case of the Anglerfish. These differing physical characteristics can also be the deciding factor for choosing a mate or can be helpful for blending into the surrounding environment. Researching sexual dimorphism in dinosaurs can be extremely difficult because suitable tissue and skeletal samples are required for testing, and most fossils and other samples have been damaged by decomposition and fossilization.

Hdesro1 (talk) 03:51, 25 February 2015 (UTC)
 * This is finished. Josef Horáček (talk) 18:07, 2 March 2015 (UTC)