User talk:Hdewey/sandbox

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I'm an online ambassador for your WMST 250: Women, Art, and Culture (2014 Q3) class and have just stopped by to provide a quick review and add what I hope will be helpful comments.

You've done a nice job on the article! It's well-organized, well-written in an encyclopedic tone and has a little background information. It gives a good overview of her career. The citations are from reliable sources and are well-formatted. You've done a great job linking to other articles. Overall, a really good job!

It might be nice to have a fair use image and links to other resources. For instance, you may want an External links section with a link to her IMDb page.

I'll check in on you again, and I'll be watching this page if you have any questions or comments.-- CaroleHenson  ( talk ) 05:58, 1 November 2014 (UTC)


 * Nice source additions! One thing I forgot about: You may want to take a look at Janise Yntema for a sense of what an introduction or lede would look like. Wikipedia articles start with a "lead" section, which is a short summary of everything in the article. For some articles this summary can be a few paragraphs. Others (like Yntema's article and probably this one) can be a few sentences long.-- CaroleHenson  ( talk ) 03:46, 4 November 2014 (UTC)