User talk:Healym24/1883 Texas State Convention of Colored Men

Letting you know I did peer review. --Alexbattledust (talk) 20:34, 12 March 2020 (UTC)

Peer review: Maiya Douglas
The only suggestion I would have to improving your lead is to add the year date in the first sentence. The overall structure of the article is a little messy, I think the discussions and outcomes should be separated from the main information. The tone is very neutral and the topics discussed are balanced. The sources included are also very reliable. I would suggest rereading your article to improve the grammar and sentence structure. The sentences contain all the pertinent information but are long and wordy. They are also missing commas/ commas where they are not necessary. I would also be careful about using 'they' when talking about multiple people, it makes it confusing to read. Other than that, I think this article is very well done, congrats!Douglmai (talk) 04:22, 14 March 2020 (UTC)Maiya Douglas