User talk:Heatherwilcox/pembsBasics

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That's better - but you must give independent references if you want the article to have a chance. Look at WP:GNG and WP:RS, (not forgetting the obvious WP:COI). Nice to find someone who listens, and doesn't tell US how Wikipedia works.... Peridon (talk) 20:35, 21 September 2010 (UTC)