User talk:Heavy wait/sandbox

Feedback
Hello! Sorry to have missed you in class. Here's the feedback for your article; let me know if you have any questions or if anything needs clarification.
 * Try to address the pre-existing tags if you can
 * Introduction is too long - should be a maximum of 3-4 paragraphs (WP:LEAD)
 * Don't mix different citation styles - footnotes are preferred, and should be formatted consistently. Aim for a minimum of one footnote per paragraph/bullet
 * Make sure to use complete citations, including publisher, title and retrieval date for online sources
 * Because of your topic it's okay to cite some non-mainstream sources, but don't cite Wikipedia
 * Your SOPA section has a bulleted list that would be better formatted one line per point. Nikkimaria (talk) 12:42, 10 April 2012 (UTC)