User talk:Hedgeb/sandbox

This seems like a great start to your article so far! One thing that I would suggest is that "Sparrow" in your first paragraph I don't believe needs to be capitalized. Also, the middle paragraph confuses me slightly as to what the information is about exactly. Overall, though, you're doing a good job and you aren't including any of your own biased opinion in the article. Ssprak (talk) 01:56, 28 April 2017 (UTC)Ssprak