User talk:Heffrey3

Your AFC submission
Hello. I just came across your AFC submission on Draft:Jeff Capri. I would like to give you some advise to give it a higher chance of success.

You may want to start your article with a lead section to describe the subject of your article.

Secondly, I suggest you remove some subjective descriptions which appear to be like a fansite, such as the line "he is considered by his peers to be one of the nicest, funniest comics of his generation", which is an opinion and not a fact, while no sources are provided.

The organisation can be improved, for example in the sentence "Born in New York City, yet raised entirely in Newport Beach, California." An improvement would be to put this under a "Life" section, instead of a "Jeff Capri" section. Note that a biographical article rarely has a section under the subject's name because it is most likely already mentioned in the title. Also, such claims would have to be referenced with a reliable source.

Finally, on referencing, there is a lot of room for improvement. Instead of placing hyperlinks directly within the text, try to use citations. Of course, it is advised that you find some reliable sources as stated above, rather than, for example, using the personal website of Dick Capri. The sources you have listed and the hyperlinks within the main text simply are not reliable and independent enough.

I see, after a quick Google search, that there is some coverage for Jeff Capri, but most of the mentions are in sources which are not generally regarded as "reliable" by Wikipedia. Perhaps he has some fame, but he may not fully meet notability guidelines, which you may look up. If you find it too difficult to add suitable sources, it may be that it is simply not wise to submit this for creation for now, until notability has been established. You may also check out Wikipedia tips on Your first article.

The Average Wikipedian (talk) 14:40, 2 July 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jeff Capri (July 12)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by MatthewVanitas was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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MatthewVanitas (talk) 22:48, 12 July 2015 (UTC)

Draft:Jeff Capri concern
Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Jeff Capri, a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it.

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Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 23:59, 1 January 2016 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Jeff Capri


Hello, Heffrey3. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "Jeff Capri".

In accordance with our policy that Articles for Creation is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply and remove the  or  code.

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing.  Onel 5969  TT me 17:27, 6 February 2016 (UTC)