User talk:Heinev1/Evaluate an Article

Great review, Heinev1! You're absolutely right that the lead is a bit...off. Definitely strangely presented, and some strong wording in there too ('enormous', for example). With such a broad topic like this, there's lots that can be improved, even just by adding more catefories and sub-categories about different foods and ingredients, as well as ancient surviving cookbooks and techniques. I'm wondering, why did you decide to assign yourself this article for review, but have Social Class in Ancient Rome as your topic? It's not a problem that you have two separate choices, just curious as to how you made that decision. Overall, good work! Grade: 10/10. Gardneca (talk) 20:11, 5 February 2020 (UTC)