User talk:Helen Lant/sandbox

Sources: I'm sure you're aware you need to actually add in your sources. If you're not sure how, take a look at the tutorials again.

Intrawikipedia links: You need to go back and add in links where you have (link). Some places where you could link to other Wikipedia pages but you do not have a (link) placeholder include "Ojibwe" and "Oneida" tribes (both do have pages). Other things you might consider investigating for links within Wikipedia: California Institute of the Arts, oddard College, New York University's Graduate Musical Theatre Writing Program at Tisch School of the Arts, Alaska Native Heritage Center, Hawaiian Playwrights Initiative, East Coast Two-Spirit Society, Dramatists Guild of America. If you're not sure how to add links, take a look at the tutorials again.

More information: This sentence: "DeFoe grew up in Wisconsin in the Ojibwe and Oneida communities of his parents." is really vague. Does "Ojibwe and Oneida communities" refer to multiple communities that were a mixture of Ojibwe and Oneida, or multiple communities that were either Ojibwe or Oneida? Were these communities a reservations? Could you add more about which parent was Ojibwe and which was Oneida? Or were both a mixture? If you don't know, that's okay, we are all just doing the best with what we can.

This is a really good start!

AliciaSuzanneAdams (talk) 16:34, 30 April 2018 (UTC)