User talk:HelenaA12/sandbox

Hello this is, running on tired, Peer Review
Heyo it is I, one of your peer reviewers. I hope this is the right one I'm supposed to review (it likely is). Anyways, one of the first things I would advise you to do is add one of those info boxes onto your Wikipedia page, it's just handy to have it to sum up some of the basic information such as birth year, birth place, name, nationality/citizenship, whatever you would want to fit in there. The character count is lower then our requirements which is like 15K (which I only hit 3K similar to you) so you would need to somehow stretch that further somehow, whether it be by going more in depth with your artist and her artworks somehow. You can likely do some more linking for some of the words/places used such as the city which your artist is born as well. " She comes from two cultures, Mi'kmaq on her mom's side and Canadian on her dad's." this line can be reworded to be instead "She was born to a Mi'kmaq mother and Canadian father" which would sound better in my opinion. "During this time she would wonder why the different communities were always going against each other. The school on base would describe the stereotypical Native American attire and culture, but when she would go to the reserve, what she saw was completely different." this line may cause bias issues with the Wikipedia folks so I would advise it to be looked over and rewritten a bit. It would have been easier if there was a name of said military base and whatnot but what can ya do now about that. Obviously I doubt this is finished since there's parts that say "Add picture" and stuff like that so yeah. Though your first artwork that you did write details about does contain a quote and I believe that quotes aren't allowed? But I might be horribly wrong for all I know. This is about all I have that I can comment on so hopefully you can get a good grade on this assignment and pass. (I hope that for myself as well) Mammle2 (talk) 05:10, 25 February 2020 (UTC)