User talk:HelloKumar

February 2016
Please do not remove maintenance templates from pages on Wikipedia without resolving the problem that the template refers to, or giving a valid reason for the removal in the edit summary. Your removal of this template does not appear constructive, and has been reverted. Thank you. GermanJoe (talk) 10:47, 19 February 2016 (UTC)

Hi

Thank you for pointing that out. Is it okay for you to review the edits I have made to the page: Backup Exec and provide any feedback? Also, can you please guide me about how can I get the template message removed?

Best Varun — Preceding unsigned comment added by HelloKumar (talk • contribs)
 * Hello there! There are several things to understand here.  One is that paragraphs like "Backup Exec 15 is fairly easy to install. Not only is the installation process well automated, but also the ancillary parts needed can be installed automatically. [2] Backup Exec recovers data or systems at any scale, from an individual item to an entire server. With its client/server design, Backup Exec provides backup and restore capabilities for servers, applications and workstations across the network. Current versions of the software support Microsoft, VMware, Linux and Macintosh amongst a longer list of supported software." are VERY promotional and you've sourced them from what is considered an "unreliable source."  Paragraphs like this will need to be removed or rewritten to be non-promotional, and also sourced from reliable sources before the advertising tag can be removed. Please also note that press releases are also not considered reliable sources. The tag regarding Conflict of Interest may not be removed until no editors with conflict of interest are editing the article. Chrisw80 (talk) 17:39, 24 February 2016 (UTC)


 * Hi
 * Thank you for the quick turnaround. I have made more edits to remove words like easy and simple which previously suggested that it was promotional. Also, let me clarify that I'm not being paid by the software manufacturers for this article.


 * Can you please review and comment?


 * Thank you for your time.
 * Best regards!
 * Kumar — Preceding unsigned comment added by HelloKumar (talk • contribs)
 * Hello there, no need to use the helpme template again, I have your talk page watchlisted so I'll see if you reply. Also, please remember to use ~ to sign your messages, you can use that instead of typing your name.  Regarding the BackupExec article, it still really looks too promotional and relies too much on primary sources.  Basically, if you see a sentence that looks like it would be in an advertisment like "Backup Exec 15 is fairly straight forward to install. Not only is the installation process well automated, but also the ancillary parts needed can be installed automatically."  It's sourced, but it looks like a paid review, rather than a legitimate journalistic review of the software. Chrisw80 (talk) 06:40, 25 February 2016 (UTC)

Hi I got your point. I edited the introduction portion to remove the objectionable items you mentioned while also including references from a recent review by ITPro magazine. Thank you for all your help sir.

Best HelloKumar (talk) 07:01, 25 February 2016 (UTC)

Hi If the information on the Wiki page is okay, can you please remove the Template messages/Maintenance|maintenance templates on the page?

HelloKumar (talk) 05:09, 26 February 2016 (UTC)
 * Hi there, I'll take a look later, but I'm not sure I will be removing them. Last time I looked, the article still needed a lot of clean-up per the maintenance tags. Chrisw80 (talk) 05:13, 26 February 2016 (UTC)

Hi I've been cleaning the article over the past week or so to include basic product information whatever is available to me. Also, as previously stated, I'm not being paid by the software manufacturers for this article. Thank you for all your kind help on this. HelloKumar (talk) 06:23, 26 February 2016 (UTC)

Hi Just a friendly follow-up reminder to check if you have any feedback. I've written the page to the best of my knowledge and technical in nature (no marketing stuff). Also, let me clarify that I'm not being paid by the software manufacturers for this article. HelloKumar (talk) 15:31, 4 March 2016 (UTC)