User talk:HelloSYK/Gliomastix murorum/Dclemenzi Peer Review

Obviously, because this is a point-form list of notes on your fungus there is not much structure. I do believe that your history and taxonomy section should discuss the discoverer of the fungus and the origin of the discovery (was it accidental? how did they find the fungus?). Saprophytes are rather interesting and I feel that further delving into that topic before comparing to your fungus can only do good for the interest level of your wiki page. History and taxonomy section brings up plenty of these new similar fungi that I believe need more introduction when we get to finalizing these outlines. Growth section very clearly describes the conidia growth which is great. Perhaps you can discuss the behaviour of the fungus (is it filamentous, etc). Next section, introduced what NPK, PK and NK mean before using acronyms (I understand what you mean but it may not be obvious to those without a background in abiotic soil factors). I think you can introduce what a bar unit is when measuring the soil and ideal conditions for common fungi or plants or perhaps common soil levels. The antimicrobial capability of this fungus is interesting and I believe that may be a trait to further look into and perhaps compare to other antimicrobial fungi activity. As well, I would advise using the full genus name when introducing fungi and only using the "G." or "T." when just previously using it.

Overall, it seems as though your fungus has rather interesting properties that can be more highlighted in your final copy of this assignment. The quantity of courses and of bullet points is exceptional and will lead to thorough information being told through your article.