User talk:Helloitsking

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Bayo Aluko-Olokun (December 7)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Bayo Aluko-Olokun (March 8)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Chaotic Enby was:

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Chaotıċ Enby  (talk · contribs) 19:41, 8 March 2024 (UTC)


 * Hi Chaotic Enby, thank you for your review and response. I know we don't get it all at once and we learn everyday. However, I do not understand the remarks "the article reading like a CV" again after making all these corrections effected.
 * Secondly, there are independent reliable sources provided that weren't written by the subject himself as seen in the multiple News papers' cited.
 * I can understand with taking out the bullet point style but in what ways was the article written in an informal tone? Can you please provide or cite examples that may help guide me because I went through lots of living person's Wikipedia articles before deriving the one for Dr Bayo Aluko-Olokun following such patterns seen. Helloitsking (talk) 17:24, 9 March 2024 (UTC)