User talk:Hermera34/Archives/2016/September

18:34:01, 11 August 2016 review of submission by Abbas2016
i make a change on my article check it please if it's done as a first article for me

--Abbas2016 (talk) 18:34, 11 August 2016 (UTC)

can you please guide me i am new in making account on wikipedia — Preceding unsigned comment added by 210.56.144.211 (talk) 14:45, 1 September 2016 (UTC)

Request on 12:47:54, 7 September 2016 for assistance on AfC submission by Bec colman
HI there,

Thanks so much for reviewing my page 'Steve Dub'.

However I believe you have wrongfully rejected it on the basis that Steve is a musician in The Chemical Brothers. This isn't true, he is not a musician, he has engineered and mixed their albums, along with countless albums for other artists in his illustrious career. I only highlighted his work with the Chemical Brothers as he received 3 x Grammy's for this work, which is is an impressive award in itself. I believe it would be wrong to not recognise him for this. If you check any other Grammy winners, you will notice that for each award there is an award that goes to the artist, the producer and the engineer. As the producers and engineers are not musicians in the band, they are completely independent, however they are always recognised for their creative contribution.

I was just looking at this page as an example for the producer Steve Osborne and wonder why this is any different to Steve Dub's in terms of Notability.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Steve_Osborne

Thanks in advance for your time and best wishes

Bec colman (talk) 12:47, 7 September 2016 (UTC)

15:16:25, 9 September 2016 review of submission by Pete Rainville
Thank you for the review. I am trying to understand how to add references or webpages to support the notability of the company I have submitted to Wikipedia for consideration but I am not clear on how to add the sources, citations or references. I find the platform to do so confusing. Please help.

Please visit WP:CITE for further information. Hermera34 (talk) 17:54, 9 September 2016 (UTC)

36 hours of florida
Hey Chief I'm doing some research on the topic. there is more to follow. This is not an easy achievement for drivers to accomplish, so I feel a separate and distinct page from the two comprising races is a cromulent page. 38.101.20.2 (talk) 18:21, 9 September 2016 (UTC)

Regarding Draft:Yves Moshe Ayache
hello Hermera34 I want you help me for my  contribution I can't understand what can  I do Please help me Yves Moshe Ayache (talk) 14:06, 15 September 2016 (UTC)

Based upon further investigation, I believe that this is an autobiography and have tagged the draft copy of the article appropriately. These are not allowed in wiki. Please review WP:AUTOBIO for further information. Hermera34 (talk) 19:10, 15 September 2016 (UTC)

00:05:31, 16 September 2016 review of submission by Mablevins08
I have made the requested changes to the article and I believe you will find it in much better condition now. Please re-review and i hope that you will publish it soon. Thanks!

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AfC notification
Hey thanks for the comment! I didn't know about the RSA, seems to me like the whole section on affiliations was unnecessary, I removed it. Omnipodin (talk) 14:46, 18 September 2016 (UTC)
 * I went through the checklist at WP:BIO and the article seems to me it fits the criteria. Could you please be specific on what is missing? Omnipodin (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 14:57, 18 September 2016 (UTC)

Request on 19:12:30, 27 September 2016 for assistance on AfC submission by KathrynToope
Hi, Thanks for reviewing my contribution. It's my first one and I am not sure why the entry is being rejected a second time. I've included several references of the individual's speaking engagements (including a TED talk) as well as a link to the magazine he edits and writes for. I've also included articles done by various news outlets about his work. Could you provide me some further insight? Thank you! KathrynToope (talk) 19:12, 27 September 2016 (UTC)

Please re-read WP:BIO. In this, it's written that "trivial coverage of a subject by secondary sources may not be sufficient to establish notability." The references you provided do not provide third-party coverage of this person. In fact, many of these just link to articles written by this person or a listing of entries that lists this person. References that lists his speaking engagement do not support "significant coverage in multiple published secondary sources that are reliable, intellectually independent of each other, and independent of the subject." Hermera34 (talk) 19:30, 27 September 2016 (UTC)