User talk:Herstory1/sandbox

--Peer Review-- Hello Herstory 1! You have definitely done a good job of recognizing which parts of the article need help. If you are able to describe women's education in ancient Rome I think this could make your subsection even stronger. You could link it to the section that already exists on Wikipedia and reference the varying social classes, and how women were educated within this. Other than bulking up your topic, maybe the next step is to try to reference your sources by including the Wikipedia method for citations. But, great job! jennyhaley96 --Peer Review-- Hello Herstory 1! You definitely have a good start here, and you have done a good job of using various historical examples to back up your analysis. I also like how you included multiple aspects of male/female relations in Rome, ranging from sexual to political. Perhaps expand in this vein, broadening your material out to more diverse areas of womens' life in ancient Rome. Also, it may be a good idea to include more sources, making your arguments more concrete. If there are any primary sources that would indicate the political inferiority the women of Rome were burdened with, it would help your case immensely.Aaronshneider — Preceding unsigned comment added by Aaronshneider (talk • contribs) 13:45, 21 April 2017 (UTC)