User talk:Hevydevy27

Your submission at Articles for creation: Tony Hachem (October 24)
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Tatupiplu'talk 11:35, 24 October 2020 (UTC)

February 2021
Hello Hevydevy27. The nature of your edits gives the impression you have an undisclosed financial stake in promoting a topic, but you have not complied with Wikipedia's mandatory paid editing disclosure requirements. Paid advocacy is a category of conflict of interest (COI) editing that involves being compensated by a person, group, company or organization to use Wikipedia to promote their interests. Undisclosed paid advocacy is prohibited by our policies on neutral point of view and what Wikipedia is not, and is an especially serious type of COI; the Wikimedia Foundation regards it as a "black hat" practice akin to black-hat search-engine optimization.

Paid advocates are very strongly discouraged from direct article editing, and should instead propose changes on the talk page of the article in question if an article exists. If the article does not exist, paid advocates are extremely strongly discouraged from attempting to write an article at all. At best, any proposed article creation should be submitted through the articles for creation process, rather than directly.

Regardless, if you are receiving or expect to receive compensation for your edits, broadly construed, you are  required by the Wikimedia Terms of Use to disclose your employer, client and affiliation. You can post such a mandatory disclosure to your user page at User:Hevydevy27. The template Paid can be used for this purpose – e.g. in the form:. If I am mistaken – you are not being directly or indirectly compensated for your edits – please state that in response to this message. Otherwise, please provide the required disclosure. In either case, do not edit further until you answer this message. Blablubbs | talk 14:16, 9 February 2021 (UTC)

Hi Blablubbs, thank you for your feedback.

This is my first attempt at creating a Wikipedia page so it's very much a learning process for me. Any advice and assistance you can provide would be greatly appreciated.

In response to your question, no I am not being paid for this article, however I am creating it on behalf of a colleague. He asked if I knew about Wikipedia pages and I offered to create one for him free of charge, because I wanted to learn how to do it.

That said, I can see how it may look like a paid article and I am happy to make any changes. If you are at all able to offer some pointers, there are two things I would love to know:

- Which sentences or parts of sentences are of most concern? - Which facts that are not currently cited do I need to add proper citations to in order to gain approval.

Thanks for your help Blablubbs and have a great day!

Hevydevy Hevydevy27 (talk) 01:29, 6 March 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Tony Hachem (February 9)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Blablubbs were:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Tony Hachem and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Tony Hachem, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "Db-g7" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
 * If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
 * If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:AfC_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Tony_Hachem Articles for creation help desk], on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Blablubbs&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:AfC_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Tony_Hachem reviewer's talk page] or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Blablubbs | talk 14:16, 9 February 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Tony Hachem (June 13)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Ken Tony was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Tony Hachem and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Tony Hachem, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "Db-g7" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
 * If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
 * If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:AfC_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Tony_Hachem Articles for creation help desk], on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Ken_Tony&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:AfC_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Tony_Hachem reviewer's talk page] or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

 Ken Tony  Shall we discuss? 08:57, 13 June 2021 (UTC)

Concern regarding Draft:Tony Hachem
Hello, Hevydevy27. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Tony Hachem, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again&#32;or request that it be moved to your userspace.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 09:02, 13 November 2021 (UTC)