User talk:Hewentao/sandbox

Hello Wentao!

I am supposed to be peer reviewing your draft for the wiki article, but you do not seem to have any actual work written up. For the most part, it seems like you have an outline of what you like done. Thus, I will be peer reviewing your outline. For each numbered point in your list, I would like for you to include specific examples as to Chinese laws related to the environment. Even if an article is out of date (by a mere 4 years), it does not mean it is useless. Most environmental laws take forever and a year to change anyways, so four years may not be incredibly significant. Please make sure to include sources as to the impact contribution from each province and that the information is provided in a concise way (a table perhaps?).

Good luck on your wiki, Nicole

Nmatamala (talk) 02:49, 25 April 2017 (UTC)

Hi Wentao,

I think the outline are pretty good, meanwhile, it needs a lot of actual work.

I suggest you to focus on one or two parts and update the information as much as you can. Those articles on Chinese environmental issue are not of very good quality, so they may actually need more time than you think.

Good luck on your editing!

Lvquanyang (talk) 16:32, 25 April 2017 (UTC)