User talk:Heyates14

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Donald_Trump_presidential_campaign,_2016

This is a description of Donald Trump's current presidential campaign. It explains his political positions on a variety of topics while also showing his polling numbers, debate performances,and the media coverage of his campaign.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rape_culture

This is a brief description of the feminist concept of rape culture. This term refers to how rape is pervasive and normalized due to societal attitudes about gender and sexuality. It gives this history of the term and its criticisms along with other terms associated with it.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/New_feminism

New Feminism is explained as a new school of thought that emphasizes the equality of men and women while embracing the natural differences between the two sexes.The theory is explained here along with its recent uses and history.

Welcome!
Hello, Heyates14, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Tburress (talk) 22:41, 6 January 2016 (UTC)

Peer review - Hannah/Dragonchild07
It looks like you've been making good contributions to both "Rape culture" and "Exploitation of women in mass media". These are definitely important issues and adding the section in the former article about the documentary "The Bro Code" and elaborating on how it highlights the objectification of women was easy to read and impartial. I also saw you fixed some basic grammatical errors, which made the article easier to read. I also read the material in your sandbox for these articles: might I suggest deleting the "according to..." parts of the paragraphs? It makes it feel a little less neutral for some reason. Unfortunately, I couldn't find your revisions in new feminism, but I'm sure that you're making progress. Thanks, your articles look much improved!