User talk:Heyoreo/sandbox

Emily's Peer Review

 * 1) First, what does the article do well? Is there anything from your review that impressed you? Any turn of phrase that described the subject in a clear way? The parts you are adding are well developed so far! If you want to expand and add more, that would probably be helpful. The organization is well done (by country).
 * 2) What changes would you suggest the author apply to the article? Why would those changes be an improvement? Revise first two sentences of Tanzania and try to reread for grammatical errors. Make sure you add citations.
 * 3) What's the most important thing the author could do to improve the article? Citations! Don't forget these.