User talk:Hguo2/sandbox

You need to add some citations to your neutral voiced post and I fixed some grammatical errors within your sandbox and published the changes. I think that it helps if you choose to use real names and companies instead of my friend "Z". I think that you may want to make it more explicit in your IRAC portion of how the situation/ issue directly relates to your leap project. I think that the input that you provided in your neutral voice summary will be beneficial just work on clarity. --Kgoncalves10 (talk) 18:02, 29 March 2020 (UTC)

In the IRAC, your last analysis is your conclusion, you may want to reword your last analysis or just delete it since you have made your point clear in the first two analysis. You also need more sources to back up your neutral voiced summary. Team 8 ChrisX120 (talk) 04:05, 6 April 2020 (UTC)