User talk:Hibrahim1955/sandbox

Hibrahim1955's peer review
I think your planned contributions are going to be really good additions, the importance of it will especially help form the article. I noticed the alert on the top of the page suggesting the need for citations to reliable sources, adding in numerical values from different cities/countries could help resolve this issue and add more statistical information for the article. There could possibly be a section or a table created showing the different rates of nature increase in different countries and how they have evolved over time; increased, decreased, or stayed the same. The importance of the rate of natural increase will be an essential section to explaining how different factors change and affect the rate over time. Great work!Hannahabigail (talk) 04:26, 3 April 2018 (UTC)

Additional feedback
Great additions to the article, I think the newly included rates make it a stronger article. Hannahabigail (talk) 02:16, 12 April 2018 (UTC)