User talk:Hidef sarge/sandbox

This section is written according to the Wiki Manual of Style. Their choice of language is easy to understand and is written with proper punctuation and grammar. The author does use evidence from the articles. The evidence should be referenced with the author and publishing information.

I like how informing and practical your information your writing is. It all seems to be legitimate information from trustworthy sources. However, you are using too many reference links. When you have multiple sentences in a row from the same website or source, you really don't have to put a reference link after every single sentence, just the last one — Preceding unsigned comment added by Snunemaker (talk • contribs) 13:46, 15 November 2013 (UTC)