User talk:HighQueenErin/Women in piracy

Greetings, You definitely included very interesting details about your figure that make her seem exciting and expand the public's knowledge of her. This contribution can be improved with re-wording and citing. You could replace "this past history" with "this involuntary movement" or "this displacement" to be more specific about what exactly influenced her piracy and to give the sentence a better sound. You may also need to add more points and cite at least two sources. Great contribution thus far! Takirajohns83 (talk) 23:21, 21 April 2020 (UTC)takirajohns83